I heard the door slam, and immediately looked at the clock. It was dark, the rain had ceased and the wind was still hitting the limbs against the window. I searched for my glasses, as all I could see were the glow of the red letters of my digital clock. Putting on the glasses I could see it was 2:45 am. Why is he home this late? I waited to hear the familiar sound of the keys in the door. But instead was jolted by the sound of the door bell.
I quickly jumped out of bed and flew down the hallway to the door.
As I opened the door the security light shone on the faces of the two people at the door.
Are you …..
I didn’t hear what the two police were saying, my body was floating away to another place, a place of peace and hope.
Are you … they said again. tears fell as I answered their questions …
This is my response to Daily Prompt: The Clock.
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A real tear-jerker.
Sorry, I was a happy mood when I wrote it,
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Very good!
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Awesome response to the prompt! I am still curious to know where this stroy leads. Your suspence is amazing and your style, intriguing!
Beautiful post!
Thanks – will have to wait for an appropriate Daily Prompt to finish
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What a sad story.
Sorry, others are happier
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*like*
You went down the same route as me (i.e. a veeery short story) but it came out quite different. Amazing how divergent two stories inspired by the same line can end up being in only 100 words or so.
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I *especially* like this one though because everyone seems to be writing short stories which I think are more fun.
I wrote this very late in the night. Daily Prompts appear at midnight in Australia. I was also in a very happy mood, so I don’t know where this story came from 9probably too many cop shows)
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Late at night. That explains it a little bit
Love the feature picture flower. What are they? Like the story haven’t figure it out yet. The tears. You meant you died?
The feature flower is a from a Gumtree, I took the photo on a recent Holiday. Did I die, I will continue the story in another Prompt D 34